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Little help for my lyrics
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kon-tiki
695 posts | 11 Posted on 05/21/2008 at 11:21 Quote : (psyche/pop-rock/progressive in the style of the first albums of Genesis "Nursery crime", "Foxtrot", ...) you're kidding me?!! i love early Genesis 
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17 posts | 12 Posted on 05/21/2008 at 11:44 Yeah, except that it will not be Tony Banks at keyboards or Peter Gabriel singing but me ... 
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cdanddvdpublisher
81 posts | 13 Posted on 05/21/2008 at 18:29 Keep in mind that a lot of phrasings can work a lot better with the melody than those that are "correct" - sometimes it's okay to bend the rules a bit. | ||
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17 posts | 14 Posted on 06/10/2008 at 11:04 You can hear the result in two weeks from now... | ||
kon-tiki
695 posts | 15 Posted on 06/10/2008 at 12:30 Why not now??!!! 
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17 posts | 16 Posted on 06/10/2008 at 12:37 I could... in fact it's over 95% finished but we have to respect the rules of the game : http://forums.en.audiofanzine.com/index,idtopic,318963,idpost,,highlight,reset.html the date is set for june, the 24th | ||
cdanddvdpublisher
81 posts | 17 Posted on 06/11/2008 at 05:01 Can't wait to hear how it worked out. | ||
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17 posts | 18 Posted on 06/11/2008 at 09:31 Don't be too impatient, you could be disappointed 
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17 posts | 19 Posted on 06/25/2008 at 10:53 Tadaaaaa ! The story of the mysterious butterfly's flight (in collaboration with Psyx) : Part 1 : The mysterious butterfly's flight Part 2 : The mysterious butterfly's dream you can go here for more details (in french) : Collective spirit (5th season) | ||
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17 posts | 20 Posted on 06/27/2008 at 10:37 And the lyrics : This is the story, The story of the mysterious butterfly’s flight. My story : Quest for flowers, colors and great light ! I’ve been flying All around the shiny fields. I can go Anywhere I want, I can do Everything I ever wanted. Fly from flower to flower And feel the power of the wind Upon my wings. Sometimes I dream About my past life, The tiresome walks, The endless sleep in this cocoon With no one else to touch But me… And the fear, Everything scared me so mutch… But now I’m free, And I feel so strong, Delicate and majestic, I hit the sun with my powdered wings all day long ! I may live only one day But what a day ! Between the earth and the sky A brand new world arise ! The giant bird could get me, So I must keep flying. The bird sees me. He came from a tree. He’s gona catch me. I must increase my speed. His beac is going to crush my wings ! His beac is going to crush my wings ! But make no mitakes, Beware of the storm I could create. You will understand the meaning of the butterfly effect, Behold the power of the butterfly effect ! I’m like happiness, I never look back, never look back… |
