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Little help for my lyrics
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TheStratGuy
50 posts | 21 Posted on 07/04/2008 at 23:40 Sounds good, perhaps heavier effects (chorus or something like that) on the voice on some passages would have made it better? The voice in itself is great, but I believe that on some parts a sort of almost ghostly, doubled/chorused/warmed/whatever'd (  ) effect (like that you can hear on Jeff Buckley's voice on Nightmare by the Sea as far as I remember) would have brought something to the atmosphere of the song, in my opinion.
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17 posts | 22 Posted on 07/07/2008 at 14:34 Thanks TheStratGuy for your comment, the fact is that I worked the effects on the voice lately in the global mix process, I thought it was enough... I was afraid of making it too much  can you tell me what passages you're talking about ? | ||
TheStratGuy
50 posts | 23 Posted on 07/12/2008 at 00:55 Quote : I’ve been flying All around the shiny fields. Quote : Fly from flower to flower And feel the power of the wind On these two passages I think you could put more emphasis on the effect that you've used (whatever it was it sounds good, just maybe not set deep enough). On this passage: Quote : But now I’m free, And I feel so strong, Delicate and majestic, I hit the sun with my powdered wings all day long ! Increase the sort of chorus effect on each sentence, so as to give the impression that you sort of add one more voice to a choir at every sentence (not sure if I'm clear enough about what I mean, so go and listen to Queen's Bohemian Rhapsody and I think that'll convey what I have in mind more than I ever could at such a late hour). Don't have time to check the rest of the song right now, I'll edit later if I thing of something else. | ||
cdanddvdpublisher
73 posts | 24 Posted on 07/13/2008 at 05:07 Effects can be tough - sometimes it's better to err on the side of caution than to take them too far. it sounds like you're getting to where you want it though. |
